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Diana Nyad—Marathon Swimmer
(1) On August 19, 1979, Diana Nyad began her historic swim from Bimini, Bahams, to Jupiter, Florida, 89 miles away. (2) Nyad, a veteran of several marathons swims, wants to set a new world record for the longest open-water swim. (3) In 1974 she swam across Lake Ontario from north to south—a difficult crossing because of the swift current of the Niagara river. (4) A year later she completed a swim of more than 25 miles around New York City’s Manhattan Island, she had battled dangerous currents for nearly eight hours. (5) The swim from the Bahamas to Florida, however, would be far more treacherous than anything she had previously attempted. (6) It would require exceptional physical and mental strength.
(7) Nyad, like other long-distance swimmers, knew that every marathon swim is a grueling physical experence. (8) In earlier marathons she had become delirious from the fatigue of continuous stroking, kicking, and breathing. (9) She also knew that her senses would become impaired. (10) Her dark goggles would fog over, making it impossible for her to see. (11) Even though her coach and crew were in a support boat only twenty feet away, the tight rubber swim cap that covered her ears would prevent her from hearing the
coach’s whistle. (12) The salt water would even affect her senses of taste, touch, and smell.
(13) In addition to extreme physical exhaustion, Nyad was aware of the many dangers she would face in the water. (14) During earlier marathons schools of jellyfish had repeatedly stung her. (15) On Nyad’s Bahamas-to-Florida swim, a shark appeared.
(16) Nyad’s crew was prepared with an electronic shark shield. (17) Crew members sent out a wave of electricity that did not harm Nyad but affected the shark and cause them to turn away. (18) Electricity can be used to repel many other kinds of animals. (19) Despite all the obstacles she faced, Nyad successfully reached her goal. (20) She was exhausted but happy. (21) She waded onto the Florida shore. (22) She had endured 28 hours of nonstop swimming. (23) The world record for the longest open water swim was hers!
1. What change, if any, should be
made in sentence 2?
A. Change veteran to Veteran
B. Delete the comma after swims
C. Change wants to wanted
D. Make no change
2. What change, if any, should be made in sentence 3?
A. Change swam to swum
B. Change difficult to dificult
C. Change river to River
D. Make no change
3.Which is the most effective way to rewrite sentence 4?
A. A year later she completed a
swim of more than 25 miles around New York City’s
Manhattan Island, battling dangerous currents for nearly
eight hours.
B. A year later she completed a
swim of more than 25 miles and had battled dangerous currents for nearly eight hours, and it was around New York City’s Manhattan Island.
C. A year later, completing a swim
of more than 25 miles and battling dangerous currents for nearly
eight hours around New York City’s Manhattan Island.
D. A year later she completed a swim
of more than 25 miles around New York City’s Manhattan Island
because she had battled dangerous currents for nearly eight hours.
4. What change, if any, should be
made in sentence 7?
A. Delete the comma after Nyad
B. Insert or after grueling
C. Change experence to experience
D. Make no change
5. What change, if any, should be
made in sentence 8?
A. Change she to they
B. Change continuous to continous
C. Insert a comma after stroking
D. Make no change
6. What change, if any, should be
made in sentence 13?
A. Change extreme to extream
B. Delete the comma after exhaustion
C. Change dangers to danger’s
D. Make no change
7. What transition should be added
to the beginning of sentence 16?
A. Fortunately
B. Hopefully
C. For example,
D. In addition,
8. What change, if any, should be
made in sentence 17?
A. Insert a comma after Nyad
B. Change affected to effected
C. Change them to it
D. Make no change
9. What is the most effective way to
improve paragraph 3 (sentences 13-
18)?
A. Switch sentences 15 and 16
B. Move sentence 17 to the end of
the paragraph
C. Move sentence 18 to the
beginning of the paragraph
D. Delete sentence 18
10. What is the most effective way to combine
sentences 20, 21, and 22?
A. Exhausted but happy, she waded onto the
Florida shore after enduring 28 hours of
nonstop swimming.
B. She was exhausted but happy when she
waded onto the Florida shore, and she had
endured 28 hours of nonstop swimming.
C. She was exhausted but happy, she waded
onto the Florida shore after enduring 28
hours of nonstop swimming.
D. Exhausted but happy when she waded onto
the Florida shore after enduring 28 hours of
nonstop swimming.
Answer:
I will only answer some because this is your entire assignment, you have to do at least some of them on your own, you can't just not do an an assignment and expect others to do it for you
1.D 2. C 10. A
Explanation:
THREE details from the Lion, Witch and Wadrobe text to support the theme of GOOD versus EVIL.
Answer:
snatching cuz nice and cool and evil? Its been long
Look for rhetorical strategies in this quote by John F. Kennedy:
...not as a call to bear arms, though arms we need -- not as a call to battle, though embattled we are -- but a call to bear the burden of a long twilight struggle...
Which literary device is used for rhetorical effect in this sentence?
I believe it's repetition
THREE details from the Lion, Witch and Wadrobe text to support the theme of GOOD versus EVIL. ASAP LINKS OR BAD ANSWERS WILL BE REPORTED
Which idea best supports an argumentative essay against playing football in middle school?
Football is a popular sport in the United States.
Football is a dangerous sport.
Football was invented in the Americas.
Football has a larger audience than baseball.
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Answer:
i have an answer from my own, i would say that if a student practices football they might not be able to have free time to do other activities such as hanging out with their family.
Explanation:
some coaches take football seriously even for middle schoolers, so they will force them to go to practice everysingle day.
write a complete sentence using the word purist.
Answer:
When it comes to Christmas traditions, my mother is an absolute purist.
Explanation:
Answer:
The elderly purist would complain to the minister of the church when she would see a speck of dirt on the pew.
Dressed in a suit and tie, the purist raised his hand every time to answer each question the teacher asked.
Any time the children would try to trick their mom into letting them go to bed late, the purist of the family would always point out that their bedtime was at 9:30.
Having a purist at the game table meant that nobody could cheat or change the game in any way.
Explain how propaganda is used as a weapon.
In some instances, propaganda is used to dehumanise and incite hatred toward an alleged adversary, whether internal or foreign, by instilling a false perception of that enemy in the minds of soldiers and civilians.
What is Prpaganda ?Propaganda will exaggerate and manipulate information to fit a particular narrative. It can be incredibly deceptive if someone does not precisely understand the context of a situation, and this is how it is employed as a weapon.propaganda against the military of the enemy.
Propaganda was employed against opponents as well as to try and sway public opinion in neutral nations. All sides have employed aeroplanes and balloons to drop flyers and posters over warring troops and civilians since the beginning of the war.
Wartime propaganda needs to targetto lower opponent spirits. To undermine the will to fight is one of propaganda's main goals when it is directed against hostile nations. It makes many attempts to weaken the enemy's resolve to resist. One is to envision the military triumphs from the propagandist's perspective.
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Q.1. Twain falsely reported that some of the travelers had died because
A. the travelers gave him permission to lie about them B. the travelers left town before the news printed C. the leader of the travelers refused to give Twain any news D. Twain believed the lies the travelers told about each other
Q.2. How does Twain use exaggeration to create a humorous voice in this excerpt? "With encouragement like that, I felt I could take my pen and murder all the immigrants on the plains if need be, and the interests of the paper demanded it".
A. He says that he can murder people with just a pen and paper. B. Twain's boss has encouraged him to murder to get news. C. He explains that he commits murder when he is actually telling lies. D. The newspaper wants all of the town's visitors to be killed.
Answer: i dont know
Explanation:
1. Twain falsely reported that some of the travelers had died because the travelers left town before the news printed. Thus, the correct answer is option B.
Who was Mark Twain?American novelist, stand-up comedian, and travel writer Mark Twain achieved success. The Adventures of Tom Sawyer (1876) and The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn (1884) are two of his best-known works (1885). Many people agree that Twain is among the greatest American authors of all time.
2. Twain uses exaggeration to create a humorous voice in this excerpt when he explains that he commits murder when he is actually telling lies. Future American authors used Mark Twain's wide use of exaggeration and other literary methods as a model.
Hence, Twain added comedy and improved the overall quality of his writing by using severe exaggeration.
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Help again, I have I-Ready lessons to do after this so I need your help. If you get it wrong you will be reported, if you send a link you will be reported.
Answer:
answer is c and dont report people if there wrong everybody makes mistakes :))
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IF A TOMATO IS A FRUIT THEN DOES THAT MEAN KETCHUP IS JELLY?!?!?!?!
Answer:
No, jelly and ketchup are two different preserving processes. Jelly uses mostly the juice of the fruit and pectin as a thickener, while ketchup is more of a boiled pulp from the flesh of the fruit.
Explanation:
July
by Susan Hartley Swett
When the scarlet cardinal tells
Her dream to the dragonfly,
And the lazy breeze makes a nest in the trees,
And murmurs a lullaby,
It's July.
When the tangled cobweb pulls
The cornflower's cap awry,
And the lilies tall lean over the wall
To bow to the butterfly,
It's July.
When the heat like a mist veil floats,
And poppies flame in the rye,
And the silver note in the streamlet's throat
Has softened almost to a sigh,
It's July.
When the hours are so still that time
Forgets them, and lets them lie
Underneath petals pink till the night stars wink
At the sunset in the sky,
It's July.
What do the noises that the speaker calls out—the lullaby the breeze murmurs and the soft sigh of the streamlet—represent in "July"?
A. the speaker's desire to break from the laziness of summer
B. the startling beauty of summer days
C. the peacefulness of the long, slow days of summer.
D. the intense heat of mid-summer days
Answer:
C.) The peacefulness of the long, slow days of summer.Explanation:
During the poem, it explains how every little thing is blooming slowly in summer. It also says, "When the hours are so still that time
Forgets them" this means that the time is going by very slowly so the days are long. While they explain about all of the nature it makes the poem peaceful. I also took the test and this is 100% correct.
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I called to the Lord, and he answered me; he delivered me from all my fears. Psalm 34:4Read the passage.
Hugh the Mostly Fearless ran down the alley and stopped short. A tall stone wall blocked his escape, and on either side tightly shuttered houses loomed above him. No one was going to help him get out of this one. He turned around, and as he expected, his three pursuers started closing in. Why hadn’t he taken his father’s advice and become a plumber instead of a knight? He sighed, put his head down, and drew his _______.
Which word best completes the sentence?
spear
sword
knife
axe
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who remembers this song??
Answer:
Not me. I don’t listen to Taylor swift lol
Explanation:
I NEED THIS QUICK! Write an example of a simile about Minecraft, if you spam an answer just to get the points I will report you.
your as brave as a Minecraft player mining at night
(im not sure this works)
Which subgenre is NOT based in real life?
biography
autobiography
fairy tale
Tall tale
Answer:
I believe it would be Fairy tale.
* Someone please check me if im wrong
Explanation:
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whats 35 times 1000
right answer will get brainliest
What kind of figurative language is “horrible pit”? A. Personification b. Vivid word choice c. Metaphor or d. Allusion
Any absurd answers will be reported. Ill give branliest to the best answer.
Answer:
metaphor
Explanation:
hmmm this is hard bit i think it metaphor because a figure of speech in which a word or phrase is applied to an object or action to which it is not literally applicable.
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Should children be allowed to use phones in school? Why or why not?
3. How does the Washington communicate the importance of this event to readers?
Read the passage by Booker T. Washington below. Then, answer the questions that follow. One day, while at work in the coal mine, I overhear two miners talking about a great school for colored people somewhere in Virginia. This was the first time that I had ever heard anything about any kind of school or college. . . . I resolved at once to go to that school . . . the Hampton Institute. In the fall of 1872 I determined to make an effort to get there. . . . I had been traveling over the mountains most of the afternoon in an old-fashioned stage-coach, when, late in the evening the coach stopped for the night at a common, unpainted house called a hotel. . . . After all the other passengers had been shown rooms . . . I shyly presented myself before the man at the desk . . . the man at the desk firmly refused to even consider the matter of providing me with food or lodging. This was my first experience in finding out what the color of my skin meant.
Answer:
Explanation: He tells a story of the first time he experience over the color of his skin and how i guess he kinda kept going despite that.
What is the purpose of literary analysis? Why would a reader want to analyze a story?
a literary analysis is helpful if you want to understand the story without reading it and you would want to analyze it to find and understand the best parts of it such as the theme and moral.
this has more than one answer if you don't know it don't answer if you need points don't answer no links
Choose all the right answers.
When you use a dictionary, you'll learn about:
how to write good stories
spelling
kinds of word (n., v., adj., adv.)
meaning of words
pronunciation
time of day
Answer:
spelling, meaning of words, kinds of word (n., v., adj., adv.)
is our gain also our loss summary
Answer:
Yes
Explanation:
Give me a sentence and a definition for the word “immigrant”
Answer:
one that immigrates: such as. a : a person who comes to a country to take up permanent residence. b : a plant or animal that becomes established in an area where it was previously unknown.
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Immigrant sentence example. There is a large Indian immigrant population. The immigrant population is concentrated in or near the large cities. Boston is the second immigrant port of the country.
Explanation:
Which sentence uses the most precise and concise language that could be used in an academic paper?
A. Old people aren't into technology.
B. Some people much older than I am definitely do not believe that technology is a good thing at all.
C. It is not believed by some older people like yours and my parents that technological stuff is good.
D. Some people from my parents' generation do not see how technology has benefited society.
Click to review the online content. Then answer the question(s) below, using complete sentences. Scroll down to view additional questions.
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What type of relationship does the Cook Islands have with New Zealand, and how does it benefit from this relationship? (Site 1)
Answer:
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ENGLISH SMARTIES I WILL GIVE BRAINLIEST *MUST HAVE ATLEAST 5 SENTECES BUT YOU CAN ADD 5 OR MORE IF YOU WANT AND PLEASE READ THE WHOLE DIRECTIONS FIRST PLEASE AND THANK YOU
Answer:
For the Past I would invite my old friend Jordan. I would invite her because I miss her and she was a good friend. For the present I would invite my cousin Eliana. I would invite her because she is my favorite cousin and I love her. For the future I would invite Eleven from stranger things. I would invite her because she is my favorite character from the show.
We would all talk about memories and about stranger things. I would ask eleven "what is it like making the show?" and tell her I love her. I would ask Jordan how she has been lately and tell her how much I miss her. I would ask Eliana how she is doing and tell her everything that has happened to me since the last time I saw her. We would have an amazing time!
Explanation:
Which BEST describes the conflict in this selection? A) an external conflict between Coach Moses and Pops B) an external conflict between Jerome and his mother C) an internal conflict between Jerome and his memories D) an internal conflict between Ms. Willow and her opinions
Answer:
I'd say C
Explanation:
I need help...again... have any ideas?
Answer:
i think one of them is the last one cause the poem is about making choices
Explanation:
I know that it's in the wrong subject but I really need help and I'm trying to have more people look at it, bc like no one's active in biology, but here's the question. If a photosynthesis reaction begins with 3 grams of reactants, what will the total mass of the products be?
mass of no prodiced is "0.65g"...i think so